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NOOOOOOOOOOOOO

That is not a loop

lamo

its the title

the problem is the title. the fact that you put it as a (remix) makes people think "well you just did some changes and made the solos better and made it smoother sounding"
Well i know how hard it can be so you get a 9. If the title didnt say (remix) but for an idea if it said (remaster) it would sound better.
Well ive given my advise.

fishfood2021 responds:

Good idea :) never thought of it

THANKS :)

im sorry

thats is not a type writer. it would have dinged by the time you finished my time.

Your right

Its not about doing the best you can or to do crazy works. its about knowing when to low down, take the time you have, and do something diffrent with that.
Thats what you did, and i loved it.

It was good

At first the beeps were starting to annoy me. then later i realize that it sounded like "Boomberange Kid" for NES. The part at 3:08 and on was when it got interesting to me. At that point the music didn't seem to follow any line. It went free from the first 1/2 of the song.

You've got skill

Keep up with the work and don't get to caught up on life. You have a gift and you need to find better ways to sell it.

Drawoh responds:

wow, thx for the advice :P

Please stop

You have no point in making music so go milk a cow.

PS: It will help with your hand eye cordination.

RePeAtEd

the same sounds and beats and rythems and volume. Get the picther. I think I spelled that wrong. any way, I understand the trying new things, messing around with a tune so i have to give you credit for doing something and not like me just wasting my time, typing, and giving advice to people like you.

I've heard this

For a second song it's not bad.
Here's some advice.
Techno isn't a build up type of music or style, whatever. The point is that you need to find a good rythem that you can change and abstract it. Don't just repeat the same things with diffrent sounds. Use diffrent rythems to keep the of the listener.

Calming

It was just to long. It felt like reading a book and 3 pages into it, it's I'm still reading about the same moment.

I'll help you get on the board anywho.

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