3GreyLeaves's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[(WF1)/Tell Astral Feelings]

I must say

i like the background parts from 13 to 40 then the sounding changed to a march and thats where i got lost. the main sounds are good just need to bring them out and more interesting.

wyldfyre1 responds:

thanks for the review ^_~.

[SIDCHIP - Toggle]

I say do more with it.

I understand that you like that style. Its nice and i agree.

I just want to say that you could easly do an amazing peice with this as the base. Could put in a solo of gutair or DX 10 sounds in it that would help the score so much.

I dont know if you use FL studio but that is where the DX 10 is coming from.

Good job. Do more. Keep going.

SIDchip responds:

Funny thing is I have a version which I played my fender over, it's good but needs a bit more work before I put it up. Thanks for the suggestion though, much appreciated.

Sid

[Our War]

i gave you a 5

So you could ruin somebody day

Just like mine

i would usely do a 0 but

edg3Runn3r responds:

okay, this was a first shot at a song, made on linux, also do you know what kind of music your listening too? it's gabber. it's not trance. so don't review it like you would trance, plus... what are you even getting at? Your review makes as much sense as solid matter being transmogrified instantly due to expose to sudden paradox, generated by thin air.

[Final Fantasy Kuja{Remastered}]

its the title

the problem is the title. the fact that you put it as a (remix) makes people think "well you just did some changes and made the solos better and made it smoother sounding"
Well i know how hard it can be so you get a 9. If the title didnt say (remix) but for an idea if it said (remaster) it would sound better.
Well ive given my advise.

fishfood2021 responds:

Good idea :) never thought of it

THANKS :)

[Beat On Classic]

You've got skill

Keep up with the work and don't get to caught up on life. You have a gift and you need to find better ways to sell it.

Drawoh responds:

wow, thx for the advice :P

[Warrior's Hymn]

Where is the other side of the story

I don't think this is one of the greater ones. It's like reading a book and the auther goes and discribes the sunset. You my say that the author can only write about a sunset for a paragraph or a page.
But the author goes on for three pages discribing this one incedent and it gets boring.

What I'm trying to say is that you have gone to far with the details. write it and lets see the other side of the mountion.

popraz responds:

I'm not really sure what you mean. Was it really that monotonous ? Anyway, thank you for taking the time to write reviews, it's a rare thing around here.

[Sacrifice on the Battlefield]

It has to come

I agree with Bullion about it being to slow at first but i think of it as three men looking below the horizen thinking of all that has happened.
The first man sees sadness in what happened. 0:00
The second man just wants to keep going and finish what he started. 1:45
The third man finds happyness for help in all the distrution.2:52

Thats how i find the feeling of this song. I'd like to here more of the up beat music that inside you. Bring out the third man and feel good in what he did.

popraz responds:

That's pretty deep, and pretty close to how I envisioned the 3 parts of the song. Thank you for the review. Sadness/darkness, Battle/not giving up, and last, not really happiness, but a kind of surrender to the harsh reality, acceptance, redemption through sacrifice.

[Eastern - Mjattie]

Egypt

All i can think of is egypt. it has that style of grace and snakes but it does get old.

mjattie responds:

you mean Egypt gets old or my song? don't know what you mean...