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I'm really torn by this song. There are some parts that I'm really enjoying, and then other parts that ruin it.

0:00 - 0:30 I almost didn't make it to 0:30 because the intro was so boring. There was nothing there that interested me.
0:30 - I felt this was when the music actually began.
0:48 - I really love the quick double tapping background. It complements the melody very well without overpowering it.
1:03 & 2:05 - I felt these parts were very weak and lazy. There is no energy to them to carry it. You had some amazing dancing feelings before and when the drops came, it was very lacking and ruined it for me.
3:06 - I enjoyed the ending. It was a good way to sum it all up.

Overall you have some great sounding parts, and some really lacking parts. I feel if you put more energy into those boring parts, you'll have a solid song.

SpeTheof responds:

thanks for the review and ur opinion

Same reason why people don't like jazz, classical, dub step, ect. People just don't like music because it's not their thing.
The thing about techno/trance is that it was over done so much a couple of years ago that most techno/trance became repetition and started to all sound the same to the general listener. Now that people have moved to dub step/house, people have forgotten how amazing techno/trance was and can be.
This is why I love Newgrounds. We have artist that loves and hasn't forgotten how amazing techno/trance is.
I'm not saying that this song is amazing, but it is unique and that's what I find fascinating about techno/trance.

TastyTeo responds:

you are making a point there, Thank you

Great

you did what was needed for this. you kept the song to what it was and made a new style that didn't lose it's touch.
my only problem is that the guitar either has to much Hz (frequence) or overload. Something anyways. It seems to cover the piano a little to much.

rtnario responds:

Very true. There's an overload of high frequencies here and it's still a problem I'm trying to solve ^^; Glad you noticed though, I wasn't really sure for myself, but now I am. Thanks!

the reason

The reason that this sounds so good is because it is a 7.8 MB file for a 3:25 song. most uploads on newgrounds is 3.6 MB for a 3:25 song. not saying that's bad to do that but I just wanted to point that out.
Trance on.

TranceCrafter responds:

You are half correct. Having a bigger sized mp3 means that the quality of the ENCODING is much better (meaning that the song can be played back without lossy compression).

However, PRODUCTION quality has almost nothing to do with the mp3's bitrate. I mean, let's say (theoretically) that one day I just went into FL and threw in some random 3xosc preset that came with the program, then didn't take any time on the song at all, called it "finished," and rendered it to an uncompressed wav?

;)

Does that suddenly make it sound "better" than a 192 kb/s mp3 that was produced with great care?

why

why are there so many sour notes? I don't see/hear the point of them.

thatdenosguy responds:

why not?

umm

you used basic FL preloaded sounds and put them together. not much there to be proud of. I don'jt even know were to start to help you. I say just watch some videos on youtube and learn something new.

xenisc responds:

well its not like i used melodies from the program. and whats wrong with recycling sounds from the program. all this is my idea not FL Studio's. i dont have a lot of time to go online and learn this stuff because i have limited amounts of time on the computer. and when i do get on im making music like this. i will learn someday but probably not soon. thanx for the review.

Nothing seemed to flow

it sounded like you just put together some random sounds in hopes that it would do something cool. Change some frequencies and smoothness in some of the sounds and it will flow better.
Liked 2:20. but that was about it.

DarkMcShadowX responds:

lets see you try.

I like it.

One thing that I feel like pointing out. With the melody at the beginning with the piano, it is nice. Not ketchy but pressurable. I feel that if you didn't solo out the piano so much that it would make it less of a * I've already heard this.* A good example of this is *Chaoz Fantasy*. The melody is played over and over again but there is always something with it that makes it withstandable to the point that it never truly gets boring.
I also feel that the piano needs a bit more of an echo. seems to stuck at each note and I beleive that it can flow better with more of a ring to it.

Drawoh responds:

sorry bout that :P
my intention was to make the piano be the one that most stood out though,
but I think I could've done that too

holy crap

I desided to look up the 'Holy Moses Dancing' and it's voted at 0.64. So, I have nothing else to say there.

The song
I realy like what you did with the background riffs. they realy expand the piano and drums. what I also think is that I believe you could do alot more with this peice. I like it, but there wasn't anything that made me want to listen again, and again.

broove responds:

Well, I can't blame you for that, can I? :)
Thanks for a review, man! And yes, there are infinitive ways of improving or changing the song. What you hear now sounded good at the moment.

Wow, talk about noob (person bellow me 2 boxes)

besides, he'll never make friends. Oh, and he like just made his new profile so his vote basicly counted for a 0.002 voting power. If only we could get rid of most-all people how just don't care, then I amagin the music would sound more like this.

About the song, I didn't like the fade at the end so maybe a final courd would do the trick, even though you are done this this song, I'm sure.

Dj-Flux responds:

A chord ending, maybe. That would make sense, but I don't really want to touch the song anymore.

I've pretty much moved on with my life, and as pathetic as it sounds doing another edit of this song brings risk of wanting something back. I do plan on doing more renditions of this piece later, of course, just not right now. :]

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